Amanda_NotToday

Drags on the characters' ignorance and ridiculous "I'm miss independent " attitude. But she literally can't take care of herself and finds herself in constant danger or being kidnapped. MC is extremely frustratingly stupid. I hate books that make male characters gravel when there is a reason for how they behaved and the MFC inability to understand this until you've already invested money for more useless chappf the same thing. The writing is good and has so much potential, but the author dragged this on for way too long, so I stopped purchasing coins as a result. Way too much redundant complaining and ignorance. Won't be finishing the book.

Can someone like my comment so I can get a fast pass? Still deciding if I want to continue reading. Thank you.

And just like that...I'm done with this lame story. Even the writing is horrendous. Sounds like a 9th grader wrote it. Lost me as a reader. ✌️

Exactly my thoughts. I've noticed many mistakes like this throughout the story.

And with this...I think I'm officially done with this book. What a waste of money and time. All characters are completely useless and dumb. To include all Alphas and their packs. Not a single bodyguard present and a potential dangerous party. Friend goes off first chance she can get to get F not caring about the dangers of evil people literally wanting to kill her friend. The Beta just ups a leaves. Every shifter is completely useless against the vampire. Avas supposed powers are completely useless . Selene is completely useless and knows nothing. Lucas knows the risks yet gives in to crybaby Ava whom has now got several pack members killed and her friend kidnapped and more problems for Lucas. Like seriously dude. You can do better. Drop her already. Let her self-destruct. I'm done. Lost a reader.

Anyone else annoyed with Selene? I swear she is evil. She encourages Ava to be stupid and is never around to help her. How dumb can you make characters? Like seriously. I'm at the point where I want her to be caught already. Her and her stupid friend Lisa. At least it will make the story interesting lol

Why must the author make these women so stupid? Not once does Ava think to call the Beta? Not once does she think Lisa is I danger and call the damn Beta? No, just sit there, in the kitchen, like an idiot. 🙄

So this. The money spent on this book.🙄 I think I'm getting close to throwing in the towel. I keep hoping for improvement but despise Ava, Selene and Lisa more and more. 120 plus chapters of the same Feminist BS with little to no growth. Just a male, hating story when they literally depend on men to keep them safe yet are dishonest, keep secrets and disrespect the men who care for them at every corner. This story is so mentally exhausting.

I'm really getting pissed at Selene. She talks so much garbage about Lucas and how Ava needs her freedom, yet where was she during the abuse Ava received by her pack her entire adolescent life? Where was Selene during her kidnapping from Clayton's pack? Oh, that's right, she wasn't there to protect Ava...EVER! Yet she pushes her towards danger each time and talks nonsense about Lucas or acts like she can protect Ava. Some wolf. She wouldn't even be near Ava if it wasn't for Lucas. I am so tired of this already. It just keeps going. Lisa is also very ignorant. Maybe all need to be kidnapped yet again to have some damn common sense. And keeping secrets from the people trying to protect you has me screaming. The entitlement is insane.Im just ready for Lucas to cut her loose already. She want her freedom, fine. Gibe her a one way ticket out. Have fun. Ava couldn't protect herself at all. If it hadn't been Lucas rescuing her, she would have never made it out alive. The rogue wolf in the forest would have found her first, then her own pack. Selene would have been nearly dead in the forest trying to still find her. She is absolutely useless. This is so dang frustrating. Two books and no lessons learned yet. Just ignorant women claiming to be independent when they literally are DEPENDENT on EVERYONE ELSE and yet crap on the ones taking care of them. I am team Lucas and a new Luna...please.

And not once has Ave inquired how Selene ended up in her bed. Or thanked Lucas for finding her, caring for her and bringing her to Ava. This is by far the most frustrating story I've ever read and somehow have to find out how much worse or better it gets. This character definitely makes me want to bang my head in the wall sometimes. lol She listens for to Selene who gives her only have truths and riddles yet constantly punishes Lucas when Clayton literally broke into her room and forced himself on her still trying to mark her after she told him not too. And she takes in his feeling more. Ugh. I can't.