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It is a good fanfic but seems too much of an exagerration of the original pokemon anime with some corrupted level 110000+ legendary pokemon wanting to destroy the world , Primal groudon and kyogre the last time we're level 4000+ while raquaza who is mcs friend sky guardian is level?? In anime raquaza needed to Mega evolve to deal with both of them and then palkia is level67000+ while dialga is 71000+ this is way too exaggerated and long of a level scaling

I think the author should add the no female protagonist tag since the mc that is tartarus takes no women as his wife/lover I thought at first it would be the daughter of nyx the transmigrator but it was not her then I thought it would be the 6th daughter of chaos Nicole but instead the author had her marry lucifer when she entered Hebrew world this is so disappointing I read the book so far thinking he would end up with her but noooooo the mc is too dense I feel that by this point even eris would be married to some other person and mc will remain single till the end.The mc makes almost no changes to the main Greek mythology plot the only changes that happen are in multiple transmigrators appearing in the world and the changing of the partners of some gods.

Bro shagaru magala is not the shame of the elder dragons it is stronger than chameleos and kirin the only reason why hunters would have hunted him would have been is due to frenzy virus

Well the this seems more to be an exaggeration fanfic since there are dragon gods which can apparently still use their powers in the normal world which should not be possible then we see the female dragon goddess of inventions give the mc s adopted parents potions and according to my assumptions this has caused their children to have high potential but according to me this is not possible first of all if potential could be increased by God's potions then why wouldn't the god takemizuchi use such potions on his Familia since he focuses solely on potions then the most 3 rd thing which made my impression of this novel go bad was that when evilus raided the city it I written that zald was defeated by ottar but in the fanfic he defeated ottar.Then the mc is just letting his siblings protect some idiot girls like adi who value kindness to much.The author wante to probably show mc on his rampage skill stage 3 or further and then defeat evilus zald and alfia and then become hero

It is the best soul land fanfic I have ever read but the why is yuhao s 5th soul ring only one time use item this is the best and the worst spirit ring since you can use it only 1 time I think the author could have chosen some other skill for soul ring and not make it only 1 time use.Then the water dragon king martial souls skills consume 1% origin per second I think it would be better to convert it to soul power or reduce the cost when he gets stronger because if you just always keep it at the same rate then there is no point for second martial soul if because if your fortune points are less then the skills are scrapped and have no use.

Well it's a good fanfic but the mc first says that pokemon emerald he released would be very difficult at first we see it in the first area where Cynthia and Iono struggle like iono loosing to the first gym leader a lot but after that Cynthia is just easily clearing all areas like after leaving the thunder gym after being defeated 6 times she explored the area and found grassy terrain and then won like where is the difficulty and then against Norman she won with some power of shitty bonds and her sceptile Mega evolved and she defeated it very easily.Were is the difficulty??? It has just disappeared .

It is a very good novel and has huge potential. At first I also thought that it was a system slave one but as I read the novel further and further I realized it was very entertaining

The story is very good author in fact it is better than most of the novels which are coming so please continue writing

The story had so much potential since an ai chip was involved but after reading I realized it was trash the mc is copying one piece techniques then after that some random kenjutsu Cresent style what is the difference between this and the sword style it doesn't need the sword to be drawn what the hell is this shit.Then finally some sense was coming back since the ai created lightning flash but it is gone since he used an earth type sage technqiue how is this possible without him going to the three holy places and mastering the ability to absorb sage energy.He suddenly has an op technique known as thunder God mode with which he is battling with nine tails for an person with ai to reach this level after inventing so less techniques after so much time is disappointing

The mc doesn't even know how to act low key just tell 2 or 3 at first he thinking not to tell his trump card I thought mc had some brains and would conceal the spells he learned but nope