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  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu4 months ago
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    anyone who knows the raws name can you please share

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu5 months ago
    Replied to Taoist_Daoist_UN

    Is this a translation or original work? I want the context translating using AI and writing using AI is different altogether

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu5 months ago
    Commented

    Although most people hate the troupe of later revealing that the protagonists had something special, its better for the story to do that than make the MC be ordinary because it will create plot holes. For example, let's say Naruto trained so hard for his gains and he had no talent or anything special in the end he achieved power to be the strongest. Trust me, that would be a mockery of your own creation, what you are saying is the talented people in the universe were so dumb that they didn't train much or neither did they had the will to. Let's take the Hyuga for example, their training is brutal even though they had talent, they were out there bleeding in training while Naruto was goofing around the village, even after Naruto started to train, they were still training. If at the end Naruto become stronger than them despite having no talent and only training less than them then it's complete asspull. You can say the MC indured training no one else could. Then that just means he is special after all

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu5 months ago
    Commented

    Nooo, she doesn't have first class. She mentioned it herself during Karakura Town arc that she and Ichigo had comparable spirit energy, Ichigo only had less than half of his usual spirit energy then

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu5 months ago
    Replied to sixpathsofsimp

    maybe he is new here, but the site used to have some good stories years back before they were taken down. but even with today's standard, there are a bunch of other fan fics significantly better

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu6 months ago
    Replied to JC_Xero

    Like you Said, Boruto can't any of Momoshiki abilities before timeskip, but could still take on code in Karma v2. Our MC here has absorbed everything of Ishikki including physic and Chakra but still says is weak. If Boruto could use Momoshiki abilities he wouldn't be weak Kawaki proved it already

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu6 months ago
    Replied to Ryszol

    Spoiler alert Sorry for late reply but this guy knew Ishikki powers. He even started using the abilities. Even some rinnegan abilities. Authors explanation didn't have anything to do with knowledge

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu7 months ago
    Posted

    I have enjoyed the reading so far, no major deal breakers yet. Can I anyone tell me the raw name if its a translation

  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu7 months ago
    Replied to Hunter_Slayer_1297

    This is a Chinese fan fiction and it was written sometime ago. Just as he started, Chinese netizens starter campaign to boycott FMA author's work after Arakawa made some comments which were interpreted to be anti-China. So the fan fiction author faced tough choice,either abandon work or change it, he chose to change and remove all FMA elements. spoiler: The author just made him face gate of truth and lose all alchemy powers, he then started Scientist path

    This book has been deleted.
  • chrispinechikwatu
    chrispinechikwatu8 months ago
    Posted

    Firstly, the translation is very good for chapters I have read, I can recommend checking out translators other works. This fan fic is all over the place, 10 chapters in and the timeline and characters are already butchered. In naruto hinata was kidnapped when she was 3 y/o, here it happened at 6 y/o just so that the MC should appear in those events and connect with academy. Sasuke is 6 and just registered at academy, in original work at that time he was struggling to even produce fireball, in this fic he can do it proficiently in a fight at 6. For some reason he and his classmates believes he can beat a 13 y/o at 6. Verdict: The author didn't watch the back stories to know exactly when something happened, he just heard from somewhere and decided to write a fan fic