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Easily one of the best written fanfics I’ve ever read, mainly because the main character actually causes changes n the story and has connections to characters from the main story. I can’t believe this is the only fanfic I’ve seen to actually have someone be related to nephis and have history with the great clans. All the OC characters that were added feel both well written but also don’t take over the story letting Klaus and his interactions with the main cast shine. And this is one of the only if not the only fanfic that has regularly posted multiple chapters per day since the beginning. Can’t wait to see what happens next

So far this story has been very nice to read, no grammar mistakes and the length of each chapter is great, only complaints I can think of are that the chapters aren’t frequent enough and that the overall pacing of the story is kinda slow, that’s most likely due to the fact you have a lot of set up to do so hopefully soon the plot will pick up. Overall a very good read so far

So far this is really well written, I put off reading it because I had no clue what the inheritance cycle was but so far you’ve done a good job of making the story still make sense without that information. Can’t wait for Nephis and her group to meet up with Sunny, hopefully you drop the next chapter soon.