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Excpetionally incredible and well-written, also unexpectedly well-cultured SM... I mean, story. I myself have been researching the most perfect formula ingredients for a well-themed silky suspense with those intricate details because I mostly suck at details but you did it almost effortlessly. Well done!
Ugh, a bit too realistic. Stop killing me... I prefer being gay because of this.
Wow, what a compelling review. Thank you so much! I myself hav\e to say it's interesting you mentioned about those grammar errors or structure because I made mistakes as well despite my major so... yeah. Anyway, about you not being able to distinguish characters, I believe I have given enough distinctions for each, especially and specifically Cornelius himself. So, if you ever struggled, feel free to re-read it again carefully!
Thanks! Agreed and you should get annoyed too!
Intriguing premise despite the density, still managed to pull of insanity out of the plot that doesn't seem quite measly yet the idea of imaginary friends somewhat pulled it off. Well done!
I got to be honest, I started as a 3rd POV writer and always struggled when it comes to 1st POV. So, to think that people tend to praise me for being able to pull this off is both funny and intriguing at the same time. But yeah, I'm glad you really enjoyed the work hard I have been put for almost a year, even when many dismissed it, calling it a "talent" instead.
Chapter 5 so far and I really love the fact this story brings quite a sensitive topic related to equality and the way people are treated due to difference. The pacing was surprisingly quick and perhaps it was one of the quickest read I have ever done too. Well done!
Thanks!
Thx!
The prose is fine, just be careful with repetitive usage of tropes because it will kill your story in a long term. The power system definitely is unique, but just a polishment here and there will make it looks better,