Key_and_Gate

The original fic has already been axed

Thanks for the mass release

? Why did the chapter change?

Nice, I like fairy tail fanfic. This one has better grammar but there’s another translation of this fic and it’s ahead, it’s at like 81 chapters

Only read 7 chapters, so this is not a comprehensive review or indicative of the story’s quality. First impression is that this dystopian AI ruled setting would be more suitable for a full length long chapter novel, not a webnovel. An over reliance on AI and the eventual loss of critical thinking would be good commentary on the development of AI today. The introduction of dungeons and ranks and spiritual energy feels like a crutch and I haven’t seen any prominent published English fantasy novels which web novel’s settings like the SSS rank/dungeons, but this does fit the web novel and light novel setting more. The main character’s actions, thoughts, and motivations are not explained, or are at best, shallow in the first few chapters, so it’s hard to get a feel for why he does what he does. 18 years are skipped, so you go from his birth directly to adulthood. It shouldn’t all just be attributed to willpower, why and how does he rebel against the system, and without getting caught? How does he know about the rift and gates? Even the AI seems to be unaware, or at least, unable to calculate it based on the synopsis, so where did he learn of it? Lots of things go unexplained at the start, which I assume will be explained in flashbacks later on? Anyways, it’s fine, but I enjoy fanfics more.

There is another person who’s translating this and is at 290 chapters, titled Miss kaguya wants my surrender

Bro just controlled everyone effortlessly