Tajimen_Williams

I have been following your transitions/works for a while now, and they are some of the best quality ones to be found on this app. But this story just didn’t do it for me the transition and your work on it was great. but the story it’s self is what gets me, the ideas and overall story is a good idea, But I feel like in these Historical fantasy’s especially ones like A song of ice and fire, get ruined and lose what makes them great, when the protagonist brings and uses to much real world advanced technology, Like the Weapons(guns) and things like him bringing modern farming vehicles, and technology. It’s great when they use modern knowledge and concepts and some modern technologies and things like that, but when you flood the story with too much of it and far to advanced it ruins the whole world and story’s concept of being set in the time periods of these historical fantasy’s. I probably wouldn’t care as much if he slowly advanced these things, or slowy introduced things like cannons and flintlock weapons, as it could still realistically fit for the world and the story while also preserving the core concept and structure of the world. Anyway, sorry for the rant, i’m just leaving this comment to let you know that this might be one of the only translations/works of yours that I have to drop and just cant stand to read, it’s has nothing to do with your part and work it was great and thanks for putting in the time and work so that we can cure some of are daily boredom.

It’s a good read. And I can’t find a lot of free novels or fanfics based on the 1600-1800 lmk if there as some good ones.