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well I would but it only has like 12 chapters left the original author left it on hiatus and honestly everytime I would go to translate it I get pretty bummed out but I'll get to it eventually at least to give people closure cause it was my most popular work i ever released

and I agree 100 percent the thing is iam not the actual author so iam not the one with problem

you might have not understood a thing my bad I type too fast

I going to tell you something that iIsaid on Patreon but anyways iInever actually said anybody who bother to read this reply will know the fanfic laterally stops 13 chapters later and hasn't returned fir like 6 month now soooooooo now you know I'll probably release the chapters in the next couple of days but just so you there isn't a lot of content coming anyways

I'll return i was burnt out for Abit and college is still a thing but iam good lately I did post other works on other websites so iam getting back my excitement

man this man here is spitting facts not trying to hate but yeah the jokes are pretty ai ish like he said you read one too many ai written stories you read it all and iam writer myself so iIknow which is written by ai and which is written but hand with the assistance of an ai but some people do make a great point sometimes you have this awesome great idea for a fanfic but can't realize it because you don't know shit about writing or story telling or progression at all so that you don't butcher such a great idea you resort to ai writing it for you but ai has got it's limits unless you walk it step by step the story is going to turn out unsatisfying and pretty much sloppy because ai doesn't know the siry of a fanfic and even if it does it only knows the rough outline from wiki and fandom pages on google and even then it will get loooooots of things wrong like character dialougue character personalities fir example a character does something out of the ordinary from what there personality is or doing something that at this point in the story they shouldn't be able to do that why I recommend actually writing a rough chapter and have ai enhance it at least now you write the chapter the ai just makes more engaging and understandable and that's about it iam gonna give this fanfic a five stars just to not discourage the author everyone has the capacity for improvement

man this man here is spitting facts not trying to hate but yeah the jokes are pretty ai ish like he said you read one too many ai written stories you read it all and iam writer myself so iIknow which is written by ai and which is written but hand with the assistance of an ai but some people do make a great point sometimes you have this awesome great idea for a fanfic but can't realize it because you don't know shit about writing or story telling or progression at all so that you don't butcher such a great idea you resort to ai writing it for you but ai has got it's limits unless you walk it step by step the story is going to turn out unsatisfying and pretty much sloppy because ai doesn't know the siry of a fanfic and even if it does it only knows the rough outline from wiki and fandom pages on google and even then it will get loooooots of things wrong like character dialougue character personalities fir example a character does something out of the ordinary from what there personality is or doing something that at this point in the story they shouldn't be able to do that why I recommend actually writing a rough chapter and have ai enhance it at least now you write the chapter the ai just makes more engaging and understandable and that's about it iam gonna give this fanfic a five stars just to not discourage the author everyone has the capacity for improvement

yea this story is good and I like a translator that doesn't just translate for the sake of publishing a chapter and I actually knew it was a translation right away I didn't read the raw version but honestly most fanfiction on here are basically translations and you could tell who's and original and who's not

ok this is my second review first thing this fanfic is well written no contradictions or anything like it second it doesn't follow the original fairy so it doesn't bore me honestly but that's about it while I will say the bad things about fanfic author iam writing the bad point not to discourage you but to improve whats already good and fix what's bad this by no means me just being a jerk on the internet this story is free after all so I could stop simply reading it if I don't like it ok first bad thing while the events are certainly different from the original which is refreshing but it's a while bunch of nothing to me too like it's not that bad but it doesn't add anything for me about the mc or his strength like we get it he's and Saiyan a d he's strong but how will he show that until now kabe doesn't struggle all that much he doesn't have any moment if reflection doesn't search fir new training method and while he has something like the great ape form he knows how to use it but never actually uses it so what the point of even include something that won't be used unless it's gonna be used in future chapters honestly the mc is just playing around and it was fine at the beginning but now it's just annoying as hell it's like the only emotion he has is being happy go lucky and his l*st side of him like where is the hardships yes Saiyans are strong sure but Kabe has to eventually go through hardships he has to develop as a character and for a while now he hasn't developed at all and honestly characters I used to admire get really down played because of the harem troupe you put it's not like it's bad but bro it's like they don't have any personality anymore like they only exist to please the mc or praise his every move or punish him for doing something stupid it's just all so rigid I guess but that's about it fir the bad I hope the author sees this so like this review a bunch of times so he sees it and fixes or at least improve the fanfic cause genuinely it has a lot of potential

thank you for the comment and while iam still sick I toke some meds so iam fine for the time being and I thought of taking care of posting now rather when the meds where off