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You can tell that the author really put a lot of effort into this story. He pays great attention to detail, both in the technical aspects of the writing and in the construction of the world and the protagonist's abilities. There is a lot of planning, especially when it comes to the tricks that the main character uses. You can feel that he thought about the consequences of this in the story. Now, there are some points that may bother some readers. The beginning has a lot of information being dumped. For those who enjoy this style, it's a delight, but if you don't, it can get a bit boring. The pace is also much slower than average. The story begins with the protagonist as a child, and the chapters focus a lot on his experiments and learning phase. This may seem convoluted, especially for those who just want to see the action or the journey really begin. Maybe some time jumps would help speed things up a bit. Another thing that could be improved is the dialogue. At times, it seems a bit stiff, like too many explanations being put into the characters' mouths. With a little more naturalness in the conversations, the reading would be even better. But overall, it is a very good read, with a rich world, creative ideas and an interesting protagonist.

Here we go, this is an incredible Naruto Fanfic, the system is interesting, at some point, he starts to gain too many abilities and use few of them, but it doesn't interfere with the story. The MC is slightly OP, but only if you consider those of his age, because it takes a long time for him to become really powerful, his relationship with Tsunade was very well done, and there are several theories about chakra that I completely agree with. I really liked how the system works, I like how the information is detailed, that doesn't bother me, I also saw some criticizing the Slice of Life, but I personally also like it a lot. It seems more real than just beating each other up all the time. Overall, this fanfic is a gem so far, and may it continue like this until the end!

Come on, this is a great story, it's clear that the author knows a lot about the world of Mushoku Tensei, and explores parts of the world that were never explored by the original author. His OC characters are charismatic, especially his tutors in magic and sword. The fights are perfect, exciting and well written. I like the MC's personality, he's a normal guy from our world, and when he arrives in a new body, with new desires, he doesn't adapt immediately and has to deal with it. The MC creates an organization, which usually makes me abandon the story because it becomes something very bureaucratic, but the author managed to do it in an interesting way, where the MC doesn't spend much time managing the organization. The protagonist's magic master is my favorite character, I liked her so much, I hope she becomes a romantic interest, by the way, so far, I approve of the harem members and I suggest that Aisha, when she is older obviously, also be the MC's wife, I like that she will have more prominence here. The OC characters of the kingdoms, like Milis, the Kingdom of the Dragon King so far seem consistent with what is said in the original, in short, so far, in chapter 97, it is a perfect story and I hope it continues like this! Good luck! #Eris for the harem #Aisha for the harem #Verdia for the harem #Kill Rudeus that shitty pedophile

Well, here's my first real review, honestly, as I'm used to reading Chinese Novels, I don't care about the grammar, the story is great, it has a good premise and the battles are interesting, the interactions between the characters seem a bit dry, but it's getting better after a few more in the story. Overall, a good story if you can ignore the grammar!

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