Lanaru

S=900-999,ss=1000-1199, sss=1200+, this is canon

This novel was okay at first, but it's completely ruined later on. I've read up to 200 chapters and I'm incredibly confused. Did you write this using AI? I'm extremely disappointed because I noticed the inconsistencies in the storyline from the beginning, and it became very clear from chapter 100 onwards. Everything is chaotic and lacks any structure. The main character suddenly becomes a god, then a human, which is typical AI writing style. I've tried using AI to write novels before, and the results were exactly like this – just rambling on. Honestly, using AI isn't wrong, but you need to have boundaries, your own ideas, and let the AI ​​help create scenes and expand on your imagination, not just copy everything like this. I'm confused; it started with a god incarnating, then suddenly became a deity, and then a human. Didn't you even check your own work to see how inconsistent it is?

What..., you use Ai?

This is a relaxing read, perfect for unwinding. I smiled while reading it. This novel is well-written. I think the slice-of-life theme is not bad at all; it's heartwarming. Keep it up, author!

That's a good idea. I also write Danmachi fanfiction, but I only publish it in my country. My protagonist has two Falna; the true Falna is hidden within the Falna received from the god. I've researched this, and Falna acts like an amplifier and potential recorder. It's related to the soul; stats can only increase through qualitative changes. This is where Chinese fanfiction often misunderstands. It means that even if you farm 100-1000 monsters, if there's no qualitative change, your stats will barely change. Importantly, when you lose your main god, the Falna is sealed, but that doesn't mean you become weaker. It just means your skills and abilities become unusable. Leveling up or sealing Falna doesn't remove your abilities; they're just hidden. This is another point where many writers make mistakes. This information is already in the novels themselves.

The author did not study the power levels of the story properly. He did not respect the original power of the characters that were used as templates. You inherited over 70 percent of the power, but in this novel, it is made so weak that even destroying a house or a level building is impossible. If you think the level in the story will be destroyed, the question is, why rush to have MC inherit 70 percent of the power level? You only need to use 10-20 percent of the template level. But here, MC level 1 inherits 70 percent of the power, which can't even destroy a single house. And instead of writing it continuously, you split it into sections A(1), A(2), A(3). Why? The concept of this novel is good, but you ruined it.

I think this novel has a lot of potential. If the translator wants to try writing it themselves, I'll support them. But if the translator is lazy, they don't have to. Because I've written novels before, and I understand that without a love for writing, a novel won't be as enjoyable as it should be.

This novel is good. My only minor criticism is near the end. Because the original source material didn't reveal much or provide much information, the author had to create their own storyline, making the ending feel somewhat incomplete. Another criticism is that the characters in the Danmachi world, like the gods, didn't suspect anything about Shirou. Also, the way the story explores the Fate world, which Shirou referenced for information about weapons, or other people discussing the weapons he uses, is a bit lacking. Those are my only minor criticisms. Overall, I'd give it a 4.7 out of 5 stars.

Thank you

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