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Blue you’re a terrible author, liar and person. You need to delete your account and books and just go away
Do not waste your money going further This authors real pen name is not the one listed here. I sunk $50 into this book before I figured out from another review that the book was on several different websites for free. Just under a different pen name. He has over 250 chapters already completed and posted on other websites. He also has 260 followers who are paying him monthly on Patreon. I myself had committed to $20 a month. But you’re not missing out because as of late once you get past chapter 300, he started a second book and this book goblin has been almost completely snubbed instead of getting chapters every couple of days he’s now posting every three days and his writing has simply just been thinned out like cheap liquor and water. I’ll attach proof at the end of this rant. He’s a good author and he’s very creative but my impression is that not only is the immature but he’s extremely greedy. And I’m not gonna give away any spoilers per se, but for anybody hoping the MC ever grows a spine and stops being afraid of a vagina give up hope now. I am current in the book and have canceled my Patreon subscription for many other things. I won’t list here, but I will tell you the MC is gay. And this is not about sexual orientation. My son and my daughter bolts are gay. This is about the fact that the author alluded many times that this character was gonna be a man’s man when he talks about him having a giant member and all these women that are around him being beautiful and the MC looking at their breasts and their asses but after well over 300 chapters, he shows no interest in sex at all. None zero zip. If I were you, I would not buy a single coin to put towards this book. It’s never going to get finished OK so if you look at the two examples, I’m about to post at the bottom of this one of them shows chapter 10, if you look at the words and the paragraphs the relatively close together and they are ample. If you look at the other picture, I don’t remember the chapter. I just grabbed one it’s 315 maybe but if you look at the verbiage on this page, he is thinning out and leaving spaces between not only sentences but paragraphs. In the end as readers we are ending up with much less story it makes it looks like you’re reading for a little bit, but it’s just because everything is spaced out if he went back to the format that he was using in chapter 10, it wouldn’t look nearly as much. I hope this helped.
This authors real pen name is not the one listed here. I sunk $50 into this book before I figured out from another review that the book was on several different websites for free. Just under a different pen name. He has over 250 chapters already completed and posted on other websites. He also has 260 followers who are paying him monthly on Patreon. I myself had committed to $20 a month. But you’re not missing out because as of late once you get past chapter 300, he started a second book and this book goblin has been almost completely snubbed instead of getting chapters every couple of days he’s now posting every three days and his writing has simply just been thinned out like cheap liquor and water. I’ll attach proof at the end of this rant. He’s a good author and he’s very creative but my impression is that not only is the immature but he’s extremely greedy. And I’m not gonna give away any spoilers per se, but for anybody hoping the MC ever grows a spine and stops being afraid of a vagina give up hope now. I am current in the book and have canceled my Patreon subscription for many other things. I won’t list here, but I will tell you the MC is gay. And this is not about sexual orientation. My son and my daughter bolts are gay. This is about the fact that the author alluded many times that this character was gonna be a man’s man when he talks about him having a giant member and all these women that are around him being beautiful and the MC looking at their breasts and their asses but after well over 300 chapters, he shows no interest in sex at all. None zero zip. If I were you, I would not buy a single coin to put towards this book. It’s never going to get finished OK so if you look at the two examples, I’m about to post at the bottom of this one of them shows chapter 10, if you look at the words and the paragraphs the relatively close together and they are ample. If you look at the other picture, I don’t remember the chapter. I just grabbed one it’s 315 maybe but if you look at the verbiage on this page, he is thinning out and leaving spaces between not only sentences but paragraphs. In the end as readers we are ending up with much less story it makes it looks like you’re reading for a little bit, but it’s just because everything is spaced out if he went back to the format that he was using in chapter 10, it wouldn’t look nearly as much. I hope this helped.
Sorry to say Blue but you and I have danced this dance for a very very long time. In all that time I don’t recall EVER getting 5 chapters in a single week. And at this point you have already broken your promise. It’s been 9 days, and yet NO new post anywhere in sight.
Thanks for the chapter!! Great stuff
Leaving on a cliffhanger??? SERIOUSLY????Youre killing me smalls
You’re good
Blue I posted my discord 3 days ago. Hope you got jaybird0096. I’d love to chat away from here. I’d like to say something but it’s not for “here”. Please reach out. BTW I deleted my rant. I wasn’t being fair, but that’s a later chat. Hit me up.
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