John_Mcfarland

Yeah this has become nearly unreadable. I think this chapter hit my tolerance level. I was enjoying it for a while but now it seems to be adding to my irritation levels. It's a shame this fell flat like that dial tone that was pretending to be an overzealous pancake.

He had to share a few years, cause communism.

My sense of humor does not exist on the same wavelength apparently. This chapter was pure cringe for me. Not judging it as bad or good. it's just not for me.

I found this by happenstance but it has been a fun read. I am particular to intelligent characters and this delivers thus far.

Thank you for this. I've enjoyed it.

what kind of plan..., you know what... I Don't care

I had a difficult time with this. The overarching concept is fine. However, the telling of it is at best confusing and at worst nonsensical. Interpersonal interactions are illogically approached and I just don't feel any reason to care about the characters or their development. This one is a no for me.

I dunno, I've had algae based nutrition packs... they definitely taste like betrayal. Not too sure about the silence having teeth though. That is an interesting idiom

I searched for that because I was curious and found the Honda Monkey which is a special edition mini motorcycle. So, maybe the monkey edition is just an odd somewhat usable special edition? No clue...

I am not really interested in HP so I never bothered looking at this but I was bored and finished my work for the day and thought why not. I am glad I did. The story is great. I like intelligent characters. He has faults, makes mistakes, and has had questionable judgement but honestly it makes him more human and less the typical single-minded, immature OP MC that seems to be so prevalent. Changing perspective is just part of growing up. Good job with this.