Exavier_Black

thanks for the review and this my first book so I will get better over time, hope you stay to read.

thanks for the review, and I have no intention to stop my story anytime soon.

Thanks taking time out your day to review.

alright

if you do choose to read just dont think to much about while you read and it's not to bad of a book

this story is an average story. nothing really special about it tbh. the Mc abilities is not explained good enough in my opinion. im 400 chapter in and I still not sure if the mc abilities is like other zombies or unique. ik he got a spatial ring and a domain. the domain help isolate him from the world and at the beginning of the story they kept saying other zombies had domains too with same effects plus another unique power while the Mc only have a domain. People think he have space ability power plus his domain but in reality he just have a spatial ring and a domain without a extra unique power ability. all im trying to say the Mc domain is more of a skill move than unique power because other zombies have a domain plus a unique power.

I'm not a big fan of him learning all elements, just stick to his undead elements. he's a necromancer, its perfectly fine to have his undead have many elements not him. this book should be about necromancer not a all rounder. I barely accept him being way physically stronger than everyone. I would of rather him gotten q ability to use his undead stat temporarily than him just being permanently stronger.

I just don't understand why he wasting so much time killing everyone when his system already warned him that the grandmaster could come any moment cause he connected to the dimension.

you should make it clear. do the mc always speak out loud to the system or can he speak to it telepathically. some times he speaks to the system right in front of everyone.

I agree 100% but honestly I feel like that fight shouldn't even had taken place. he fought a completely Unnecessary fight when he knew what type of power she had. even the system told him the odds of winning was almost 0%. and in the end he admitted defeat with no problem like winning wasn't that big of a deal to him. and another thing wrong with the story i feels like the way you write make it seem like the MC smart and always have plans. but he do so many illogical things it hard to tell if he even care about his life most of the time.