AnExtraInMyStory

Tapov, is that you? Lol I’m joking but it does remind me of that intro.

It was an enjoyable experience and a decent story, however the ending was the most anti-climatic thing ever. Your other novel’s mc comes in beats up the big bad but this novel’s mc dies and wow all of this builds up to your other novel. Instead of ending the story properly and giving it an ending deserving of it’s characters and stories you made it just an ad for your other novel. I would have preferred in the sea of miasma just killed everyone.

It’s a good story but dang does it get THICK in the later chapters definitely not for the light hearted. The story is nothing like the start but that’s also alright it reminds me kinda like the villain’s pov. Where it also goes to shit but it’s good shit. I do hope everything uh goes well in the end tho.

I haven’t read a lot but from the first few chapters I can tell your writing style is amazing. It feels genuine and unique while the story might or might not be the same (I’ve read a lot of extra stories so it is kinda of repetitive to me especially at the start) but I have high hopes for this story.

Istg if I pick off after chapter 54 and Kenan gets absolutely annihilated by Kaden then I’m actually gonna be depressed. Give the side characters a happy ending too. Let bro move on.

Amazing story. Though, I couldn’t get passed ch54 because I related to kenan too much and it made me depressed. I will return when I have moved on.

Bro can we let Frey be happy for like 1 second

It’s a good novel but like if another girl falls in love with mc in like a chapter or two I’m gonna feel like having a brain aneurysm

How many volumes will there be? Are you going for more chapters than ftti

You know what the novel is decent. As you go along I can see improvements gradually come. You and this novel definitely have potential. Though I would recommend after a while going back to change early chapters since the first couple chapters I won’t lie are quite underwhelming in my opinion at least. Just keep writing for now and keep up the good work.