James_8795

New perspective still flows well, I liked it. Keep the chapters coming, thanks!

I’ve enjoyed this work but am glad this was a plot chapter, seems like the lemons have superseded the plot for the last little bit.

When life gives you lemons and all that. Thanks for the chapter and glad tidings on you new direction!

This has been an interesting story so far, I have enjoyed reading it. That being said, the plot has been all over the place the longer it’s has stayed out of HP and dealt with DxD. Really hoping it tightens back up, it’s teased some HP plot line’s, so here’s hoping a shift back will bring it back to what it was before.

This is an interesting concept but needs a little tweaking. Definitely has an AI feel, the characters are soulless and the conversations more so. It’s almost like reading an outline of a very interesting story. Biggest issue is the speed of the plot, it jumps forward very quickly. Finally at Harry in Hogwarts, so hopefully it takes a breath. Still has a lot of potential but really needs to pivot.

Very well written, with unique tweaks while still well within the narrative feel of ASOIF. Really looking forward to seeing where it goes. One drawback is that’s it’s slow to update but the chapters are meaty enough to satisfy the wait.

This is a great story, sad it’s stopped updating. 1 star simply because this is a stolen work, author is PenEnthusiast from other sites. Hopefully the author will come back to it!

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Interesting read through the first 40 chapters. Future knowledge is his Golden Ticket but has to work to make it happen, and even the it’s nothing to over the top. Only critique would be his relationships seem a little light but still a fun story. Curious where it goes, keep the updates coming!

It’s Harry Potter from all the POVs you never wanted lol