Rmein_Smef

Jack trigger a special mission and try to convince a girl without system help.

i think you re way good to write fight scenes too if you return you have to think write more fight scenes with this However, it will be more enjoyable if the character cheated after a long fight scenes like temple labyrinth when he returned to harem seeing them like. he finds them as he left it :)

I haven't read it yet, but I want to give you an idea. If you add a new girl to the series, I recommend that this girl cheat the main character naturally (System feature can be given after cheating), not with any system skills . This girl gets a special title and gives 2x points every time she cheats. Also, girls can go to boys' houses for sleepovers or boys come.

I think two main characters should not be considered too much in such series because people adopt the first thing they see as the main character and when I look at the series, I think you are confused. If you want to write netori, you can open a different series. It is a good thing that you try to combine netorase and netori, but if you tried this with a single character, it would be draw more attention

I can understand Nessa or the Duchess losing their virginity to Leon, but I don’t understand why Ella just stopped at kissing her fiancé that day. Logically speaking, he’s her childhood friend and also her fiancé. Losing her virginity to someone she just met instead of him doesn’t make much sense. After all, this is a hentai novel and you may not have wanted to extend the introduction to the subject, but I think it would have been better for Ella to remain a little more loyal and stand by the hero while the others went astray, and after a while, she became the most brutal ntr character among them. (After all, this would be nice to lay the foundations for a long series)

is this revenge?

Does the mc take revenge? (frankly, I would prefer him not to take revenge or couldn't all series end with revenge) I think you can explain the description of the series a little more, I'm trying to decide whether to read it or not.

I've seen a lot of series that say system but don't tell anything about the system, but this one is not one of them, I liked it.

If I were to summarize the series now, here are my takeaways from the 60 episodes: The series is fluent, yes it's long, nice summaries, but frankly it doesn't offer what the title tells you. ntr choice based system. Throughout the 60 episodes, we only read about his mother having sexual intercourse, and we can't even call it ntr because is your mother your wife? Yes, there may be an NTR about the mother, but the author added a feature that says the system numbs the main character's feelings and there is no groundbreaking section for us to feel close to his mother. In summary, those with patience can read it.

So this is what ntr means? Did you actually start reading without reading the tags?