Loctoromel

James Tiberious Kirk?

I reckon this is a monitoring technique she learned from her father. He planted swords all through bastion like this.

Halo 2 reference maybe. Gravemind uses this phrase to describe itself when it meets Master Chief and the Arbiter. "I am a monument to all your sins."

20 chaps in and I have really enjoyed this mix of OP system and monsterisation transmigration. It makes sense for the system to be OP because boss monsters are meant to be individually OP and the MC is generally believable in his actions. Supporting characters also make sense. My only negative comment is that the transmigration aspect is irrelevant so far. I don't recall any details of his original life coming through either. I kind of like that at this stage though, but I would like to see it come into play over time. Good novel. I hope the story keeps moving forward and the author doesn't run out of ideas.

Guy is way too calm. Oh deary me, im tied to a chair. oh would you look at that, im deeply wounded all over, ive even got knives through my hands bringing me great pain with even the slightest twitch. ho hum. what a predicament. whatever shall i do?

they remind me of bikers from pokemon generation 1

the in is not referring to the table but the middle. in the middle. if a circle is drawn on the ground you dont stand on thr middle of that circle you stand in the middle. despite standing on the ground.

its a pre teen girl. no thnx. glad that mc is not a pedo. even cultured individuals agree on this.

Of course he can. In saying that, if he can't remember the controls that implies his experience didnt leave a strong impression. Its pretty clear though that this isnt the case for this MC here. If his knowledge comes from talking to his friend, which you said in reply to another of my comments, then i think this could make sense. it wasnt clear to me that this was how mc learned most of what he knew about the game. alao your reply to my comment was frank, not rude. dont sweat it. i liked the idea, plot intro, and general writing style but was bothered by this seemingly inconsistent point. thankyou for responding to my comments.

oh. i just realised. the two 'gods' are probably shang and alex fighting each other. alex is the god imposing all the karma stuff and shang is the one destroying it all. they know each other super well and hate each other. wonder if thats right. cool if it is.