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I must agree on some things, like for example that the author is making it too long, but I do not agree with you that he is writing filler, for me it is even more entertaining than the original work, in a way, the biggest problem is the length of the chapters that are very short, that is why it is long because the author writes 3 words per chapter and that does, well, as we can see, an unpleasant effect, but if we added more words and if it were a little more focused on the subject in question (the liquor worm, in this case) and not in putting in its limited number of words, things that we already know very well. This work would be perfect. Although it should be emphasized that this is my opinion.

No, there's a problem, what you've done with the television material already shows that whether it's based on the book or the show, your fanfic is going to be extraordinary. What I said was only a recommendation; by the way, reviewing the first chapters I see that you plan to turn the MC into Thor both physically and emotionally, and this is both a warning and a recommendation. Please don't turn the MC into a womanizer or a compulsive drinker. I like Thor, but those parts of him are simply too unpleasant. I say that the current protagonist is quite noble, but at the same time brutal. Please don't turn this into a porn plot or, worse, a harem. I've seen too many very well-written fanfics fall when implementing the latter, and I don't want that to happen to your incredible story. Well, that's all from my part, author. Take care and I wish you the best. Bye.

Hey author, is your story based on the books or the series? I hope it's the book since it's undeniably better and has more lore, and the pardons are at their best, like Tyrion, or the Tyrells, who steal the show. Although Margaery and Loras are certainly good, the other two brothers are real Goats, especially Garlan. I hope you include all those characters who are very interesting and enrich the work, like Victarion. By the way, I forgot to mention that your work is very good, undoubtedly one of the few worthwhile Webnovel works.

My only complaint is that the chapters, in my opinion, are very short. I'm not asking for an encyclopedia, but I do feel like something takes a while to finish. The last chapter didn't even feel like it was there when I was done.

Aha, I believe you brother, but seriously, if you are able to finish this story I will be the first to congratulate you, after all it seems that you have changed. But until then I will continue thinking the same thing and when you abandon her like you did with the others, I will gladly be the first to make fun, because you have no idea, shameless and lazy author, the pain you caused me with Bolton and the Fifth Reich, I will never forgive you for that, however I am a reasonable man, if you are able to demonstrate that you are not the same, I myself will delete my comment and apologize for the inappropriate message; I hope you abandon them so that new readers can see what a pathetic and lazy author you are.

Olvídalo, por que lo que entendí de este autor es que un vago de mierda y siempre deja la historia a medio camino y esta obra, ten por seguro que también lo será.

How to start this, I'm very bad at these things anyway, to be clear this is my opinion and if you say like "no one cares" or things like that save it, please also that we are on the internet if the BTS fans, You can talk and give your opinion too. Going to the review, there is a very important reason why I don't like this fanfic and that annoys me like no one else: the mc I have to confess, very few characters exasperated me as much as that protagonist (and I have seen works like dxd and sao), even this guy manages to make it into my top 3 most hated characters, I just couldn't stand it, In fact, the moments in which I enjoyed this work were when he was not there, I simply do not like his character, but what I hated the most was the type of work that they put him in, they do not put him in a mediocre romance or harem fiction for sick people of the internet, but they put it into a serious work. It would have been tolerable as not an English soldier who wants to defeat the Nazis, for the good of humanity or some cliché shit like that. But they don't place him as Hitler, that for me was simply unbearable. I came looking for a cruel and inhuman mc who would bring the world to its knees and extinct all the Jews, you know who would cause all the atrocities mentionable, not this weak, weak and mediocre guy who opens his legs to everyone, especially to the USA. Honestly, I'm already tired of the hero syndrome and I hate them all, equally Naruto, Issei, etc. But this mc made me hate them even more. Anyway, this is my opinion, and if you don't agree, I can understand it, because in addition to the fact that each person's tastes are different, this work perhaps has an understanding of the world and historical figures from another world, literally I don't know how many. This guy spent hours finding out about Nazi Germany, but it had to be months, since even a World War II fan like me was pleasantly surprised.

Ok, if you say it, it must be correct, by the way author, when will the new chapter come out, I want to see how you develop the tide of wolves, the original work seemed good to me, I wonder if you could improve it even more after all the idea has potential.

Hey Creed, what happened to the seven flavor liquor worm?

Well, you already achieved it with the previous fanfic, which was worse than this one. I would say that you reach it in a maximum of a month and a half. By the way, author, I'm sorry for asking you this question, but lately a doubt has arisen in my mind that it is necessary not only to survive in the gu world, but also to become the supreme lord, whether you follow the demonic or righteous path, since many times the forums that I visit say that for example people, Light Yagami or Johan Liebert, Kleinn Moretti, very intelligent and very capable people, would not even reach rank 5, unless they are destined to be Venerable, and I wonder, without being destined to be Venerable (you know great luck, chance encounters), how you manage to be a supreme lord like, for example, the old ancestor Xue Hu. (I don't know if I wrote it correctly xd)