Ivy_Nata

if you read further, there will be “a little” smut here *wink*

Thank you so much for your thoughtful words, they truly touched me. It’s inspiring to hear about your journey and how reading has become such a significant part of your life. I can only imagine the strength and resilience it takes to adapt and embrace new passions when life changes unexpectedly. I feel honored that my story is part of your world now. Your attention to detail and your willingness to engage with the story mean so much. It’s readers like you who remind me why storytelling matters, it’s about connection, escapism, and finding meaning together. Let’s keep this mutual support going! You motivate me to write better and share more, and I hope my stories continue to bring you joy and intrigue. Thank you for being here and for sharing your journey with me, it’s a privilege to be part of it. 💛

Regarding the timing of seans revelation and the waiter’s actions, you’ve made a good point. I’ll consider reworking this part to ensure it flows better and feels more natural. Writing is always a journey, and I’m glad you’ve shared this perspective. it means a lot that you’ve engaged with the story deeply enough to catch this. As for editing, I’ll admit that I’m still working on polishing things up and learning along the way. Your patience and encouragement mean a lot, and I hope you’ll give the story another chance in the future when I’ve had the opportunity to make adjustments.Thank you again for your kind words about my writing style :) it’s always a boost to hear that readers are enjoying that aspect! I hope to continue sharing stories that entertain and resonate.

hello, elizabethe! Thank you so much for your detailed feedback :) i truly appreciate the time and effort you’ve taken to point these things out. It’s clear you’re really paying attention to the story, and I’m glad it’s keeping you engaged (even if some moments have you questioning the timeline or details). As a CEO, Fara does have a flexible schedule, and I purposely skipped Bonita reconfirming her lunch schedule to keep the story moving quickly. If this feels a bit off, I hope you can understand. I’m still learning and trying to improve with every chapter. Thank you again for your honesty and encouragement. I hope you’ll keep following the story and let me know your thoughts as it develops!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

thank you dear, I'm sorry. So I like to mix up my thoughts because I'm working on a two books.