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Hope next chapter will have be from viserys' perspective. And the level up man. It's been long enough, he shoulfdreach level 50 with all the sons of harpy he will have killed. Next evolution, mahn.

Does it make sense for him to be released only to be hunted the next day?

Right?

Amazing fight but do you really have to recount it twice from two different perspectives Removes the enigma and charm from the fight

why let his guard down and sleep? Honestly, I expected him to be much more cautious; he could have slept at the outpost. I cannot help but feel that the only reason he kept Ignia was plot amour

You creep

The story is magnificent and characters are introduced and explained well. The world background is also excellent and the power system is interesting. I would give it a five star if not for the horrible punctuations. I mean yeah, it's just full stops and commas interchanged in most places, but that changes a lot and makes the read inconsistent I really hope it improves in the latter chapters because I'm giving my review at chapter 10.

Man, I hate cliff hangers. I mean, Neo faced his father and was killed and now before we know what happens next, here are more than three chapters from another POV Dude, that's cruel