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Hello everyone. The idea of the fanfiction is interesting, but the implementation is not very impressive. At least, the author has serious problems with the dialogue and writing style in the first chapters. Especially with the price of the meeting in chapter 3. But I hope the author will learn as the fanfiction progresses.
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Hello! I am not a native English speaker, so I apologize for any possible mistakes. I would like to know your opinion about fanfiction. I will be grateful for constructive criticism, expressed in a mild form, as I am just starting my career in this field.