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Lots of action and very fast paced, I'm enjoying it all so far, keep it up. I especially like the short and snappy paragraphs spread throughout, makes everything super easy to read. I was going to say something about the lack of internal dialogue during the opening sections, but that is cleared up well during the latter sections. Good work.
Now this was a fun read. Maybe I've just been reading too much fantasy lately but this was really entertaining, everything was paced perfectly and I was genuinely intrigued about what might happen next.
Really liking it so far, its reminding me of the Witcher in a way, so that just makes me like it even more. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters and seeing what you do with the story.
I'm really liking all of this so far, it almost reminds me of the Witcher in a way, keep it up!
Shameless Author here rating my work 5 stars and also encouraging you to do the same. I wanted to say something more, but I think I will do that tomorrow.