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SeventhBunko

SeventhBunko

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2024-10-29 JoinedUnited States
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  • SeventhBunko
    SeventhBunkoa year ago
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    Lots of action and very fast paced, I'm enjoying it all so far, keep it up. I especially like the short and snappy paragraphs spread throughout, makes everything super easy to read. I was going to say something about the lack of internal dialogue during the opening sections, but that is cleared up well during the latter sections. Good work.

  • SeventhBunko
    SeventhBunkoa year ago
    Posted

    Now this was a fun read. Maybe I've just been reading too much fantasy lately but this was really entertaining, everything was paced perfectly and I was genuinely intrigued about what might happen next.

  • SeventhBunko
    SeventhBunkoa year ago
    Posted

    Really liking it so far, its reminding me of the Witcher in a way, so that just makes me like it even more. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters and seeing what you do with the story.

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  • SeventhBunko
    SeventhBunkoa year ago
    Commented

    I'm really liking all of this so far, it almost reminds me of the Witcher in a way, keep it up!

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  • SeventhBunko
    SeventhBunkoa year ago
    Posted

    Shameless Author here rating my work 5 stars and also encouraging you to do the same. I wanted to say something more, but I think I will do that tomorrow.