Nightreader14

Fun read, I think I enjoyed it more as someone not familiar at all with the game Monster Hunter, so everything felt far more fresh to me. While sometimes wordy, most of the story was well-written, battle scenes were excellent, plot moved at a decent pace. Good story!

Pretty solid, one of the few novels that felt fresh and entertaining for a while. Enjoyed the redemption of several key figures, one of the stories with consistent updates.

Really loved the deeper philosophical world-building behind Naruto and Bleach that you created, that and the MC's approach to the worlds made them very fresh to read. It got slightly long-winded and predictable later on in the plot, too much explaining, not enough actual plot happening. Character design/development for the first Naruto world was great, second Naruto world got a bit too OOC for me and pacing was very rushed, Bleach's characters felt overly unchanging (but i guess that was the point you were trying to make). If i were to separate them out, i'd put your first Naruto world as a truly excellent 5/5 Naruto fanfic, the second world as a 3/5 'go wild' fic written as a whim, and Bleach as almost a 4/5 'bonus chapters' wrap-up for Aizen's lingering regrets in the bleach word that could've been written in half the length. Solid story, didn't regret reading it, which is more than I can say for most fanfics.