Ikaris265

that could be pretty cool

looks nice whats SCHABOWY?

Woo Hoyeong

erotic issues? Hahaha I think maybe it would better just to go with there were some issues

I think a comedy might be good or maybe not no actually maybe he could write Supernatural that could be really cool

It would be better if you could break up huge paragraphs like this because it's very hard to read and it would be much easier to read if it was broken up into a couple more paragraphs

Probably but I don't think there is many

The comment was sarcastic just so you know I wasn't being serious

Yeah I know I was just makin' a shitty joke cos I was bored

Alright, here’s my take: The wording’s definitely a bit wonky in places—kinda stiff and awkward now and then. Some of the phrasing feels like it was translated word-for-word rather than properly adapted into natural English, y’know? That makes the flow a bit choppy in spots. It sometimes reads like it came straight outta Google Translate without much polishing. But it’s not constant, and most of it could be fixed with a bit of light editing. It’s not unreadable—you can follow what’s happening just fine if you slow down and think it through a little. Honestly, I’ve seen way worse when it comes to translated webnovels. You can still tell what’s going on. The story’s intent is clear, and the emotional beats land decently. That alone puts it above a lot of machine or ultra-literal translations that just leave you completely lost. If I had to slap a number on it? Solid 7/10. Could definitely use some smoothing out, but it’s not bad at all. It’s got a decent foundation—just rough around the edges.