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Seeing your loved one in this situation and not being able to do anything to help can be so frustrating🥺🥺

Took me so long to get back to this, but I’m reminded once more why I added it to my favorites🤩

Nice story💯 I love the way the story is going but just one thing, I think you should stick to a POV instead of switching every now and then. It’s so confusing… but kudos to you, author👍

Really? No questions asked?? I know children are supposed to listen to their parents but sometimes, standing up to them helps remind them of their duty, which is to put their children first😕💯

Let me guess who it was, her dad?

The story is actually nice and I’m enjoying it, but I think the writing lacks emotion, or maybe it’s just me anyway. I can’t really feel the story, it’s just as if I’m reading a long line of words. But then, it’s a great story, nice one author👍

So far so good, I’m loving this. A great start, the middle felt not really put together but hey, it’s just the first chapter, right? Well done author👍

I’m so loving the suspense and then tension build-up🥰 Kudos author, you need to do some editing though, but it’s a good read.

Thank goodness I didn’t give up on this book after the first chapter… I’m just getting the hang of the story now😊

Okayyyy… this is so awkward😕😕