Lazypen1

lol, I understand your point and honestly you're right. I have also noticed that but don't worry eh, the Mc is only feeling proud and does not think he needs help from his undead. But also, I have heard you and will work on it. Thank you for trying out this book, honestly I am glad. if there is anything else I need to work on, tell me please.

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I am the author of this amazing book. If you've got any questions, go ahead. ask freely.

thank you for reading

hopefully, I am. thank you :⁠-⁠)

Isn't this book underated? well maybe it's because it's just starting. I don't know, all of the author's books are interesting. the only problem is that he never finishes them. sigh, I hope this one does or it will be a shame.

I bet Omen is having a bad time dealing with girls sigh.... women can be headaches.

thank you so much for the reviews, it means a lot to me

the story is getting more interesting thanks for the chapter

Oh my God .. this book is literally making me smile and cry at same time. Zi is so cute and Quinn, hes' trying his best to be a good big brother