Nemisis_2968

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

By Chapter 160, I’d say the book overall was good—well, at least it was in the beginning. The world-building is solid, with no major mistakes or anything noticeably bad that I can point out. However, I have to say... the MC is absolutely brainless. He’s no genius or anything close. The novel starts going downhill after the "Divine Something Tower" arc, which I believe begins around Chapter 140. There are over 20 chapters filled with unnecessary fights that contribute almost nothing to the MC's development. Yes, he does learn space aura — which, while not extremely rare, isn't exactly common either. After all, almost every main character nowadays seems to have some skill related to space or has comprehended the space law. So by that standard, it's indeed not considered rare anymore. anyways it is still impressive since he manages to do it in the middle of a battle. That part was good. But overall, it's starting to feel like Dragon Ball, where Goku lets his opponents reach their full strength before actually trying. The difference is that Goku grows stronger with each fight — this MC doesn’t. He just keeps fighting brainlessly instead of ending battles quickly, and he learns nothing from them. That's my perception of it. And to make things worse, the writing quality completely falls off after Chapter 150 to 190. It's hard to even read — the chapters are filled with junk, like AI-generated text that hasn't been properly edited. Anyway, that’s just my opinion — I had to share it because I invested a lot of time reading this novel, thinking it would turn out to be good. But sigh... what a waste of potential. I won’t be continuing any further. Sigh... Reading my own review now, I’m starting to think it would’ve been better if I had just written my own book instead. But oh well — I’m not that talented...

iIt’s a bit disappointing when my concentration breaks while reading because of a few poorly written lines that clearly feel like AI-generated filler. I mean, what is this: "They didn’t simply recover" — what does that even mean? Did they recover instantly no right because this wasnt' t meant for this right? then why is it written like that? Dear author, you could have written it more clearly, something like: “Those frozen by Absolute Zero have no chance of recovery — from the moment they're struck, they simply die, eternally encased in frost that never melts, extinguishing any and all traces of life within.” It might not be perfect, but it's definitely better than what was written.

These types of books are always worth the time,loved reading it. Waiting for more chapters of this.