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Shhmoneyboggie

Shhmoneyboggie

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  • Shhmoneyboggie
    Shhmoneyboggie5 months ago
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    It's good but they're some grammatical errors actually like "it" instead of "eat" Also you keep switching between present and past tense. And maybe just do a general cross check before posting SolidπŸ’œ

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  • Shhmoneyboggie
    Shhmoneyboggie5 months ago
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    I love Melissa I love the name I love her personality I love the characters I love the contrast between the twin girls amazing Amazing πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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    Shhmoneyboggie5 months ago
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    Navi from the avatar? Very very good I'm intrigued all your books are amazing Did you stop writing luna's eclipse?? You haven't updated it in a while

  • Shhmoneyboggie
    Shhmoneyboggie5 months ago
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    Stunning Good job Please update faster Chapter 1 was kinda shorter than a normal chapter but that was a great way to kick off the story I thought Carmilla was just a barbie girl but she's actually bad ass Lucian mmm we'll see