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It's good but they're some grammatical errors actually like "it" instead of "eat" Also you keep switching between present and past tense. And maybe just do a general cross check before posting Solidπ
I love Melissa I love the name I love her personality I love the characters I love the contrast between the twin girls amazing Amazing πππππππππππππππππ
Navi from the avatar? Very very good I'm intrigued all your books are amazing Did you stop writing luna's eclipse?? You haven't updated it in a while
Stunning Good job Please update faster Chapter 1 was kinda shorter than a normal chapter but that was a great way to kick off the story I thought Carmilla was just a barbie girl but she's actually bad ass Lucian mmm we'll see