AtotheV

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AtotheV8d ago
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need a family tree.... its so confusing when everyone calls everyone aunt or mom or grandma regardless if they are their blood relatives lol. Its the one thing I dont like about novels based in places where everyone is related or referred to as "aunt" "uncle" "grandmother" brother" even when not even related at all lol. It makes me question who is related even when I think i know... it then makes me second guess it lol. It really breaks the flow of the story when I have to go back and find where they are introduced lol. smh
Mabel's eyes flashed with irritation. "I appreciate your concern, but your opinions on this matter are irrelevant. I don't need you to tell me what's best for me and my grandchildren. I am perfectly capable of judging what I should and shouldn't do for them."
Falling For My Accidental CEO Husband
Urban · har_k
AtotheV8d ago
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ugh he is so annoying.
"Okay, that’s enough. You’re drunk. Don’t say that I didn’t warn you, Kyle." I chuckled then smirked. "Just you wait and see Jack. Just you wait and see."
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV8d ago
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ok this girl does nothing but chug alcohol... I thought maybe this story would have substance but its just drinking and partying and very shallow interactions lol.
"Well hello little sis" I huffed and order something strong. I downed my drinks in one shot.
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV8d ago
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wait when the heck was Kyle ever mentioned eith rose!
"So Rose, If I ask you, who will you choose Kyle or Daniel?" my eyes widen at Hailey question. "Mom, what kind of question is that?"
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV8d ago
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so he is dating girls and keeps acting like hes not? ugh I seriously hole she doesnt date him!
"Oh that. I kinda left her. She bored me" I looked at Kyle direction in shocked. He’s crazy. How can he just left a girl because she’s boring?
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV8d ago
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omg the poor language is killing this story.
"Just remember this Jack, if you love Adeline you must fight for her. It may not be easy but I know she will eventually let you in. She never have a stable relationship because she told me, every time she make out with a guy she ended up saying his ex name. Which she didn’t tell me it was you"
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV9d ago
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runway* man this story really needs edited for all the mistakes. I'd comment but it would be every single paragraph!
"Hey, guess we meet again" slowly, a grin make it’s way to my face. "Oh my god, Daniel how are you? I never thought we will meet at a fashion show" he chuckled. "I’m good and to be honest I don’t know you were here" I faked gasped. "You didn’t notice me on the runaway?"
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheV9d ago
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lol thats a reason to be mad not forgive him
"Give me a reason why I should forgive you?" I raised my eyebrow. He quiet for a while. "Because I’ve been mean to you. I treated you badly. That’s why I asked for your forgiveness" I stay silent for awhile. He really mean it, but I need to know if he’s serious about this.
The Model Was a Nerd
Urban · pinktulips
AtotheVa month ago
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oh no no no.... are you going to have her try to get vengence and try to shoot Vee!!!
Bianca stood on the back balcony of her suite and watched the preparations below. The suite she once shared with her husband no longer felt like a room. It felt like a sentence.
Undressed By The Mafia God
Urban · JoyceOrtsen
AtotheV2 months ago
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oh lordt move on man
“Enzo said she left. Just drop it already.” Beau shrugged him off. Christian was shocked by Beau’s behavior but figured it was probably because he was looking out for his twin and didn’t want to hear her name. He decided to let it drop, but he wouldn’t let it rest.
His Promise: The Mafia's Babies
Urban · chavontheauthor