Japan_No_1

In essence, the author has a logical flaw.

Hey author, doesn't your explanation make sense? The MC and her mother met the MC's father in the hospital. And Cu Chullain handed the MC's mother over to the MC's father. Then you explained that the MC's father was a high-class demon. Isn't your logic flawed? There are also the names Leonheart Pheles and Kurosaki Renya, two different names but the same person. Wouldn't it be better to use one name to avoid complications? The MC's father is named Mephisto Pheles, an early generation of the demon race. Does it make sense that the MC's father couldn't handle a few low-class insects?

if I had an uncle like that, I would beat him and break all his bones. Family drama like this makes people very upset

If I were the MC, I would beat up and break all of his bones, leave him paralyzed, or just throw him in the trash. Because family drama like this makes people upset.

too much "unshakable" nonsense

too much "unshakable" nonsense

too much "unshakable" nonsense

Initially, he claimed to have a divine sense of smell, and that three people knew about it: Megumi, Daigo, and Shoji. Now, he claims to have divine hearing? Isn't he trying to hide his abilities? Very inconsistent statements, just like the author.

too complicated, confusing, and long-winded, the first version is better than this one, why don't you make your own original novel instead of a fanfic?

too complicated, confusing, and long-winded, the first version is better than this one, why don't you make your own original novel instead of a fanfic?