The_Crazy_One

Story progression is fast. Like new scene after another. No sense of smooth transition. Mc? Just dumb for me. Accepts everything just given? You made the game like what? Without a storyline? This is just pure OP carrot and stick so far. maybe just maybe everything will make sense as the story goes.

I dont know if its slow or fast progression in regards with the story but i wish theres a sense of conflict, tragedy. RIGHT! the author just taking a sweet time 150+ chaps for 2mos after release? Lol.

Comedy? 😅 I guess i have different sense of humor or vise versa.

Ok. Mc Reincarnated and acting as is reincarnated body(6 y.o.) doesnt he have past memory? Or his just dumb. Then ok, lets say MC development and all, but still doing dumb-ish things. This author just want to milk its not even original theme yet i cant seem to find some originality within the story. If the blessings changes his perspective or some of it like it says then you want to develop into what? Too many contradicting flaws in the story as i read the 40+ chapters. And really name the panda thirteen? As soon as you name it like that the other same theme novel came to mind . Lolz Yet i will still give it a chance until the author flops it with, maybe a 100+plus chaps.