Mezmor

Fair - to a sicko?

No idea what this means .

What’s the Curtain Closer - I feel like I might have missed something. I though they were adventure pirates or something along those lines.

Debatable but let’s go with it.

It’s attack the gets lowered. I’m sorry but this story just has too many errors and battles are some of the most boring in all fanfic holistory. I commend your new idea to all more abilities but the excecution leaves a lot to be desired.

So boring! Again, battle ends in one move.

This is definitely AI. This phrase literally has been done in multiple AI fanfics.

And yet another boring battle. No power stones for you today.

lol 2 ultimate attacks. I do give you props , the jolteon battle is by far your best battle description and flow.

Hey, your writing has improved by double. It’s no longer a one shot move.