Mezmor

Another OP kunai

Guess I know which one you are.

This is the point where I stopped caring about the story. Don’t get me wrong—I enjoy an overpowered character, and I was really invested in this one. I loved the concept of him being favored by the sea, gaining Haki through swimming and existing in that environment. But once the story started contradicting that idea—essentially sidelining the power of the sea after he gained strength from the Devil Fruit—it lost its weight. It turned into just another tale without real stakes or direction. That’s just my personal take. The writing is decent, if a bit repetitive, and I was genuinely hooked—until this moment.

Not really

No please don’t do devil fruits - keep him human. Let him come up with cool new halo techniques instead.

This is awkward wording

Pick up that kunai, it can resist chakra blades.

It can slice a boulder but not a kunai. Everyone in this story has at leather a S rank kunai. Why bother with a sword at that point.

The last 5 chapters have gone hill and the power dynamics are confusing.