Mont_LeBlanc

great

you serious mate

amen

the thieving was cool

I like this dynamic, just the part with harem's consent a bit meh

thought its gonna be flying but this ones better

she nice

ehhh, was counting on something more unique

Id select a very small number of important and impactful fml (these that never wronged him and deserve better) where he eases up a little on them and maybe adds some romantism here and there but don't go overboard with it, vanilla shit is boring.. However author could become a little more creative with the scenes cause yes, I feel like its becoming really repetetive.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola