mth_1924

I can't understand why the MC is so calm, sheldon just betrayed him. He deserves as many punches as Kurt.

besides the update stability, is all good ........

It seems to me that you either don't proofread your work or don't do it very thoroughly. There are so many repeated facts. How many times is he going to take that sword to be reforged into two blades? How many times is he going to visit Hiashi and tell him that he stole his daughter? Also, is Sakura interested in Sasuke or in the MC? In almost every chapter, it feels like she's implying one thing or the other. How is it that everyone knows he's a bounty hunter in one chapter, and then everyone seems to forget about it afterward? These are just a few examples. I really enjoy this story and want to see it improve, so I hope you'll do a more thorough review.

A friend of mine told me that a chapter like this one, with the same themes/tags, would be really great if Tsunade were included as well.

great chapter

epic moment

yay new chapter