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Great chapter fun little novel so far I am excited to read more

really well written so far I am enjoying it immensely not the usual HP fanfic drivel either not one complaint at all Keep up the good work you have a future ahead of you as an author if you get the inspiration to write your own

why does this feel like a chinese translated novel that someone tried to make more american... i just can't

a hundred what.....

..... ok the language is getting bad in this i can barely understand it anymore what the hell

hope to read more soon its a great novel

I get that you like to keep his skills and such updated but do we really need the full version every time? like just highlight what was changed

ok this made my inner nerd super happy i am shocked he didnt go for the vault of vibranium though interesting choice

this is just pure garbage it has good premise but the writer is either the laziest person around or doesn't understand story development conversations are trash some of the sentence structure is just atrocious people do not talk that way in real life at all i made it 3 chapters in and wanted to bleach my brain with how poorly written this is

pretty well written hope to see more of this soon