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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Overall, the story itself is not too slow paced. But it’s true that certain scenes could’ve had faster pacing. I guess the descriptions and scenes that deal with inner monologues and the fights scenes could be slightly shorter, thus making the overall story feel faster. This story does have a #r18 tag. Will there any scenes in the future that are #r18?

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You’re welcome. I hope this will help you a little bit to continue this story. I’ve been enjoying it very much. Recently I’ve very much enjoyed the dynamic between Cleopatra and Nathan. Hope to see more of that. Keep up the good work!

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