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  • Daoistmv41hm
    Daoistmv41hm25d ago
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    I think it's best to publish two chapters on the same day in order to become popular very quickly.

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    Daoistmv41hma month ago
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    Thank you for the chapter. I'm enjoying this story and I have a suggestion: could you make Tatsuya's reward in the Arc Against Crocodile optional? He currently has the ability to use regular raid sand, his father's special golden sand, and iron sand.

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    Daoistmv41hm4 months ago
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    Thank you for the chapter I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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    Daoistmv41hm4 months ago
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    A wonderful story and one of the best stories about Fgo A diet you should stick to and not abandon, please.

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    Daoistmv41hm6 months ago
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    Create a story about someone who embodies the power of a Naruto character in the world of Attack on Titan. I think there aren't many ideas like that. I hope you can do it.

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    Daoistmv41hm7 months ago
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    When will the update happen? I recommend creating a schedule for story updates.

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    Daoistmv41hm7 months ago
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    The chapter was excellent, a fantastic start. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. As for the topic of Sasuke's goals and those matters, you have every right to be puzzled. I mean, sending Uchiha Sasuke with all his powers to a world that resembles the real world is almost like sending a god or a demigod. Among humans, I suggest you start by having Sasuke explore a new world environment, such as people's interactions and modern technology. Like his age, he should go to school, try to establish an identity for himself, and accumulate a lot of money. This is something It's easy for him to try and find a way back to his world while attending school now. His interactions at school are literally that he hates making friends and talking to people. He also hates falling behind and likes to be on top. Also, don't make him search Regarding ways to strengthen his eyes, he consulted medical books and modern medicine because the Naruto world is advanced in these aspects. I mean, he was learning and training from Orochimaru, and I admired his interaction with Shiina Hiyori in the previous story, so you could make Sasuke Hiyori's friend So that he may learn from her the history of the world and her books, as they will benefit him in exploring the world, or with other figures such as class D He won't help the class unless he wants to, and some characters will force him to, with help from people like Kai and Suzune. You know Sasuke's reaction; I think he'll only help with special choices and problems with other classes. I must also remember that Sasuke's physical strength is greater than any human's. I'm certain he needs only a single word to destroy a building without chakra, not to mention his combat skills and sharp intelligence. He's the opposite of all other characters Cote He fought life-or-death battles, relying on his plans and analysis; he is considered a military expert, unlike the students of the school. He is also a ninja who can spy and gather information better than anyone else in the world Cote Also, concealing his presence, his intent to kill, and his speed—I don't need to talk about concealing his presence because no matter how skilled Inokoji is, he's capable of sensing when someone is hiding, so he can't detect that Sasuke is following him or spying on him, even if he's right behind him As for the murderous intent, remember Ayanokoji. He scared Ryuin (apologies if his name is wrong) with his murderous intent and coldness in his eyes. Sasuke is far worse than Ayanokoji. I want to mention that Orochimaru, during the Chunin Exams, made both Sasuke and Sakura They witness themselves being killed by Orochimaru's intent. Imagine Sasuke; perhaps Sasuke could help Suzune after seeing her trying to attract her brother's attention, as she will remind him of herself. He might even address Kushida's problem, just as he listens to her and solves our problems. And it solves the problem of a tyrannical gang. Class C He's gaining the attention of Arisu, Nagumo, and who knows, Fuka And he made him help Sakura Airia These were just ideas if you'd like them at the beginning of your story. I need to see more chapters and your writing before I can share more ideas in future chapters. I don't know if you want to make it a harem story or not. Thanks for the chapter; I look forward to seeing more. Upcoming chapters. I also apologize if some of the ideas didn't appeal to you. As for Sasuke's goals in this world, I believe that initially he will try to find a way to return home, and the Sage of Six Paths may appear in his mind's space and tell him about the Otsutsuki invasion, after which he will decide to protect this world from the Otsutsuki. In the end, he might be forced to reveal his power to the world, and perhaps he will rule a world. I believe that humans will worship him as a god because of all his powers, especially if Susanoo appears perfect due to its size, which is equivalent to a mountain. [img=recommend]

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    Daoistmv41hm8 months ago
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    Keep going very good story 10/10

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    Daoistmv41hm9 months ago
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    Add Shiina Hiyori and Nanase Tsubaki

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    Daoistmv41hm9 months ago
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    Can you add Shiina Hiyori And Nanase Tsubaki