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I can proudly say, that you will never regret picking up this masterpiece and sticking with it to the end. I truly wish any aspiring/present writers would take note on how to successfully engage your readers from this novel, as truly, it does it well.

A truly remarkable novel with character development, comedy, world-building, drama, and mystery that made me genuinely consider this one of the best novels released this year.

### Negatives of the Novel: 1. **Clichéd and Repetitive Plot**: The plot follows a very repetitive formula, just like many *isekai* novels. The protagonist is transported to a new world, becomes powerful quickly, and starts forming a harem of female characters around him. This storyline suffers from a lack of originality and creativity. There are no serious attempts to build a new world or develop complex characters. 2. **Shallow Characterization**: The female characters are often mere stereotypes without depth or development. They exist solely to serve the main character, reflecting weak writing and a disregard for the importance of secondary characters in building the narrative. These characters typically lack independent motivations or personal complexities that would make them interesting. 3. **Excessive Focus on the Harem**: There's an excessive and unjustified focus on the romantic and sexual relationships between the protagonist and the female characters. These relationships feel shallow and lack emotional buildup or natural development. The narrative heavily relies on satisfying readers' desires without considering character development or plot progression. 4. **Superficial Dialogues**: The dialogues in the novel are often shallow and lack intellectual or emotional challenges. Instead of adding value or advancing the story, they merely fill the text and repeatedly present romantic scenes. 5. **Lack of Real Conflict or Challenge**: The protagonist is rarely exposed to any real risks or significant challenges. He gains immense power upon arriving in the new world, which makes any conflict or challenge in the story uninteresting or devoid of tension.

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It is impossible for me to rate this because it is in its beginning, but according to my knowledge of his other novels, it may be good as well. Continue.^_^

A very beautiful novel, enjoyable events, and the development of beautiful and wonderful characters. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Continue.👍👍

A novel that can only be described as an unforgettable and excellent novel because of the beautiful world building, interesting characters, very good main character development and exciting events. Keep writing. I support you and keep going. ^_^

A very beautiful novel, enjoyable events, and the development of beautiful and wonderful characters. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Continue.👍👍