Deelale

Some minor error when reading but you will not notice it if you don’t deepdive. Really good story since it is one of the few where i did not get bored and wanted more. Finished the whole story in avout a week!

Overall. Its not good but also not bad. Pros: Easy grammar. Good for newbie novel reader that cant imagine scenarios. Advice to author: Cons: overuse of first person prounouns. Overly descriptive during conversations between characthers

This story is about mc eants to make people spend “little” money to complete the system task. However each time there is always a stupid npc or coincidence that happens. Sister buys ingame items for 1000 ( which was alot of the time) but the platform takes a 50% cut. Did they lose iq and think that losing 50% of money to see “ numbers” go up is supporting a brother? Or when his company workors remove ads without permission so the players can buy ingame and he still keeps the workers. And this similar bs happens for every game so he never succed with his task. Dunno why author even has it in the first place. It just makes reading this highly frustrating since it focuses so much on mc trying to outplay the players not to spend but never succed since its either the mc who loses iq or his surrounding people loses iq that continues the story. Not recommened to read

Good story from start to end. The ending may be a bit rushed for some but it is at least logical. Higly recommened!

First and foremost search this novel name on other website to get all the chapters before this ai translation. Story is about mc that transmigates to an murim world and gets a system when he is a sect leader. So the main story is about people of earth thinking the murim world is a brand new ultra realistic game (Since they are immortal) or mc (sect leader) has to get stronger with the help of his system. All in all this story is a good read with good comedy. Examples: his disciples are serious of getting( by dancing naked) and eating dragon shit. Or the skills they learn always becomes manga related like haki, chidori, fireball and etc (after they learn some kind of fire control or lighting control skill and etc. Or when mc is flexing on his disciples by copying their jutsu/ skill and making it stronger. Another strong point with this novel is that mc is smart and knows when to back off and when to fight and etc. And his disciples is also smart, like when mc gave his vr players(disciples) task they use modern knowledge to solve it. The only downfall is that the story is a bit slow for some people: so his first amount of vr players is 88 then it gets to 800 then 10k. And this is more than 600 chapter in if i remember right. And mc is still stuck in the same murim world, we learn that there is more upper worlds( alot ) or that the players is manifesting maybe 0.001% of the powers in the real world. So this story will not end in a good while if the original author keeps writing.

Dropped from ch 8. Cus author makes mc a beta. Spoiler: Mc regressed to the past after being killed by his girlfriend and cousin. Mc is supposed to be smart and etc but author has to make him dumb… chapter 7 and he already starts trusting a girl by letting her in his bunker that he built. Even tho author keeps on repeating from ch 1-6 that mc will NOT trust anyone.

Beware!!! This is a translation and not an original even if the author claims otherwise. Webnovel site says that a original writer should output 1ch/day if its high quality and 2ch/day when its a translation. Anything other than that is sloppy work and thats exactly what this novel is about. Mass producing chapters and not even looking a comments that point out obvious flaws. This is not a newbie author and just some person ripping people off