Loideloide

I think your timeline is wrong.

Oh, and I found the pacing too rushed. I don't know if you do that consciously, but I share that criticism as well.

Did anyone else find it too easy? Like, if it were that easy, there would be tons of people spouting "justu" everywhere. Besides that, your writing is above average for a first work. There are many authors, not only here but on other sites, who have written 2 or 3 novels and have thousands on Patreon and still don't learn.

A story seemingly written by a Western author, with Chinese writing but Korean names lol

It still doesn't make sense. How does he know the transformation jutsu at that age? Did his parents teach him that?

Translation?

Biggest hater of the name Mordered in history lol

He doesn't know basic taijutsu but he knows the transformation jutsu? Doesn't that even make sense?

Apparently the author listened to my suggestion!

Mtl?