sakaifoy4457

same old chinese slop, the mc is realy boring , and the story development is non existent, also so far he has never used storm relese , like that was the whole premise of this story

It's full of plot holes, and let's say the first 40 chapters were good but from 41 onwards what they do doesn't seem to have any sense anymore , it's just unreadable it seems to be done by AI

the story is good, but I really hate the mother's character, she's really unbearable and then the fact that the protagonist forgives her is incredible, I mean there should have been at least a minimum of conflict

I just noticed I wrote that twice. my bad

how is shanks weaker than hanzo?! like come on this is just to much nerfing... what a stupid idea. also he only aura farms but never actually makes good decision.

one of the best one piece novels on this site. the story is interesting and croc as the protagonist is fantastic. loving it so far but the updates are a bit slow

The story is cute, but the protagonist is really boring. He seems like a typical Japanese MC who's never had a woman in his life, and then he lets himself be controlled too easily. And then I understand, I don't understand if the protagonist is strong or not because he doesn't seem so,

I'm positively impressed, I have to say that so far this is one of the best on the site, the story is interesting and the mc is quite nice, then he's not the usual arrogant protagonist found in most fanfictions

However, the story itself is interesting, but unfortunately it has some problems