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The writing quality is good but this book just lacks substance. There has been more massaging and overly descriptive scenes of it, than progression towards actual plot in the book. Not my cup of tea in terms of character designs, but they are atleast well written into the roles they are given. The R-18 is like half of this book from the looks of things and that's also not my thing. At that rate this isn't about warrior training or intense plot points, it's just Smut. Not into Simp MC's but can understand the point behind it, author sticks true to the character but you don't see much growth. Overall I'd say this is a solid 4/10 book in my personal taste and opinion, but if you like heavy R-18, characters that stay in their given role, and a beta MC, then this story is right up your alley.

The power scaling in these latest fights make no sense. We are told over and over again that Tier suppression is important, difference in hero rank are important, so why are they struggling with some mid-boss level type of guys? Seraphina alone is/was T13, B ranked Crimson Ultimate as well as being a greater deity. Not to mention Cierco, who just evolved not too long ago into a T14 Crimson Ultimate with atleast an A rank, so why are they struggling and having to fight these guys 3v1 and it's still a close fight? Like did the author forget his own power system? Because I am pretty sure 4-5 Levels doesn't mean shit when they are so far apart in the other categories. Its honestly asinine that they are struggling with these mid-boss side characters. The turtle is the only actual enemy that's realistically gonna give them a tough time, but that's if we just ignore the fact that Cierco is literally T14, max potential for his race, and atleast an A ranked Crimson Ultimate. Tier suppression just doesn't exist anymore I guess. You could make the argument of home field advantage but I still don't think these lower tier and rank heros should be holding their ground against 3 Crimson Ultimates who are either same tier or higher, and also higher rank. It just defeats the whole purpose of like atleast 100 chapters worth of info dumping and explanations of how the worlds power system is supposed to work. Really, really disappointing.

I would write a whole essay on what's wrong with it, but I would have to spend a whole day pointing out the bad. A little less than Mid-level generic enjoyment. Good thing it was free to read.

His decision to continue hunting after he learned about Vis not being who he said he was, is so brain dead. Yeah let's keep farming in the woods when a traitor is back in my village. So f**king stupid. Honestly I hope he losses his territory, hell, leaving for a week long hunting trip when your villagers are being killed by a dark being is also retarded. He wanted to awaken his core to learn spirit magic to help Ren and the girl, but he only learned water affinity and then dips? WHAT IS HE DOING! Literally deserves every loss here on out.

I will consider it! Can't make any promises but if I have the money I will (:

Thank you! I think this is the first I have been complimented on my grammar, haha. I'm glad to be of service to the writing community as a whole.

Ignore the haters man, I've been enjoying the book so far! While I can agree that the beginning was a little messy, After reading 200+ chapters, I can say that you're getting better and better with each chapter. I often find myself frustrated, or even cursing under my breath when I read the books that truly do lack any creative spark. Honestly, the reviews of people who love to trash on novels are pointless. The guy who claimed that he was pointing out the negatives because there are no positives is an ignoramus. Clearly they don't have the critical thinking skills required to actually provide constructive feedback. Love you my guy, keep up the good work! Also, maybe feed me a few more chapters a week if possible ;)

Ah yes, I have it added to my list already! I will be sure to give you some love toward the end of next month (: Its got a decent amount of chapters to it, and the bigger the book, the more excited I am to fall into the world!

Thank you! And I am no myth haha, just a guy with a little extra change each month! I like supporting people on here, I did it alot on my old account too. It just makes me happy knowing I could be making a difference for some people (: Your familiars are cute too!

It's totally fine! In fact, it's nice to interact with people that have similar passions and interests, as well as support them, and read new types of books. Plus, the familiars are all adorable! I'm happy to make others happy! I should be the one apologizing, making people's notifications blow up xD