Joe_Doe_2579

quick review the story and the mc powers were going great until the whole domain stuff the MC basically became the hulk and all his mage stuff just got thrown out the window until the very end of every fight. now its just the MC hulking out with a tiny bit of emotional magic you can tell the author couldnt make a good fight scene with emotional magic. he even nerfed it when the MC became super advance in his spells just so he can have the mc turn into the hulk with rage

can you tell me who the main love interest is? ngl im over here hoping its Kiera just cause it would be interesting if she found out what the MC did, also i like her personality

Ngl i really wanted to see Melissa Hall and the MC become a couple :c i've read too many novels with the same type love interest as Amanda. oh the pain

well the novel it self is alright personally MC is too overpowered for no reason. but it does have the overpowered tag so i can let it slide. if your looking for a MC that just knows how clap dudes at lvl 2 and 3 with no training what so ever this is for you. its not amazing, but its not bad. pretty mid but readable if you got nothing else to consume

character interactions feel bland like npc's talking to each other, character names feel uninspired. misunderstandings that can be easily explained by just talking

just another mid novel -system that forces the plot -weak beta male -harem in a academy ...............................................

looks like you used Chat GPT to write alot of stuff ................................................................................................

great novel only thing holding it back would be the updating frequency. also i really wanna see ren with raven as a couple apart from that im dropping this novel for now since it updates sooo slowly i'll be back in 2-4 years see if it gots more chapters.