VermillionDawn

A very intresting piece of fanfiction in my opinion . The writing stile is a bit dry and would use some improvments but that is exacly what makes this different from other works out there. I enjoyed it but not everyone will be able to .

Exacly how many pple are in those two families , the number must be quite a lot for them to mary into one another for over 10k years and no inbrieding negatives to take palce

huh ? .. tf do you mean the constelations from the city are different here .. that is not how it works .. maybe you can see more stars or clearer ,but constelations dont just dissapear , maybe depending on the locations of earth in the solar sistem you cannot see some constelations for a period of time but the will not just go puff