MrGENTLEMAN

very impressive story discription buddy 🔥🔥🔥

it funny Evey time i read it 😆

what happened at the 🚢? author

author bro what happened at the ship after he killed the 3 terrost what happened to Gabin ???

this could have been Cool Seen author in the cliffhanger MC could have killed the Gabien and also what in the ship ?

agree

this is rather good development ... good work author 👍

well Gabin is not wrong 👍

author this is really good story. ... and for the people who don't like MC there is thing called character development ...

to all the people criticizing MC, you all have 1 or 2 favourite character he don't know that dragon is using him , he just wants to save his favourite character . there is nothing wrong with it , one more there is thing called ''character development '' not ever MC is Genius like who can control everything... novel is good in its own way👍