deva110

hey author check for misspellings... It's good she and he both moves on...It's just too depressing....

hey author check u r draft for any misspellings when updating. And my boy is too broken , anxiety and panic attacks it's like PTSD. All that is left is this huh... I am pretty sure these people will never leave him alone and will only cause him pain. He needs to escape their clutches

will these guys allow him to be free or try to cling on to him for their own selfish reasons and hurt him more ? And my man needs to get his act together and make a decision like do u really need all their love anymore, can't u really live without these guys ? what is he without them ?

The story is amazing keep going. I hope ML moves out of his stupid family and heals. I want him to get his act together too, Avey is a very painful past there is nothing left anymore . In one life , he can give her everything he can give . Now ML can't go back to that anymore there is no trust nothing left . I want him to stop expecting even a little bit and move on he needs to start living. He needs to give himself a chance, and with the reward he received it's easy for him . I hope he leaves them all behind his family, avey and move on . They were never his safe place they resemble pain nothing else. I want ML to figure out all the other characters are also back in time . I don't think ml is stupid enough not to realise this . I want him to understand what they are trying to do ease their guilt nothing else. They nearly broke the ml now they want to be mother or sister or lover he wanted what's the point they killed him already, they broke him. Let him be at peace, maybe find new love or something like first he needs to heal himself. At the end if he feels that ok, now I can move on , truly forgive them, then it's ok. As a reader what I want to know or expect from future story is What is Lucian without all this pain without all these stupid expectations of love from his so called family or so called love for Avey ? who is Lucian? Does only his pain define him ? what more can he be ? Does Lucian in his new life ,want to remain as an broken character who was hurt by everyone he cared and loved and deal with the mess of other characters who now remember everything and are back in time? Deal with their emotions and their quest for forgiveness, easing of their guilt and stuck dealing with these characters and their emotions? what more can Lucian be ? Can or will he be able to find himself?