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Author, I really like your writing style and the concept of the story. Will definitely continue reading, just one small thing tho, would you mind making the sentences a bit longer and using a comma instead of a full stop? Because I feel like that little dot just prevents me from immersing myself in the story. But other than that, I love Shiro and his drama, and I cried so you did it! But please reduce the full stops.... If you don't mind [img=recommend]. Keep up the good work [img=update].
Author-nim, I love this very very much, when is it coming back?? [img=update][img=update]
Author-nim, should I or should i not Hate Bian, cos he literally curdles my blood, and the grandpa is all concerned... Am I missing something??
"my child"??
Author-nim, I love this story, and your writing style is really good too, but if I might suggest one thing, I feel like the imagery, comparing the situation to another kind of derails from the story and while your writing style is quite easy to understand, it's not something that really adds to the beauty of it. Regardless of that though, I'm a big fan of wobble bean and will continue to be for the foreseeable future. Thank you for your hard work ..
Awesome work, I really love your writing style, thank you for your hard work Author-nim.
Will they have children??
I loved the story ,, the parents one was so sad but I wanted Kayden to find someone. That is the only thing I can complain about. Keep up the good work author-nim.
Awesome Job author-nim. I've read 2 of your books so far and I loved them both. All the best for your future works.
You were right about this chapter, it hit me right in the feels. [img=In your face]