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The old green-robed man's wife needed the wives for a formation, if I remember correctly. Not sure what does that has to do with being Lin Moyu's wives, but it must be his wife (the condition) to form it. Maybe...... *absurd thinking mode on* .....they're trying to have all wives born children at the same time... LOL.
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Thank u so much for the gift~ <3
This story is promising. Aside from the rushed plotline at first few chapters, and some gramatical errors (as long as I can read and undertsand -boe from reading translations-it's forgiveable for now) it was to me a decent read. It's an interetsing plot considering this assasin trope has a different twist. The first few chapters need improvements, there's too many things going on. However, once you passed chapter 6, things paced better. Characters now have a slightly better depth. Storyline are not rushed anymore. Overall, this one is a keeper for now. Keep improving and keep the story going! I'd like to see how it goes in the end.
Wow! Tqsm! I'm so happy you love my story~
So I finished reading this story until the last chapter (Ch 9) First of all, first two chapters could use a little of Max monologue (just a little). His world seemed silent to me. I feel disconnected with MC in the first chapter. I love how the author trying to describe the sadness of losing someone, it's heartbreaking I'd give points to that. But I wish in that moment we could also know more what he was thinking..his feelings..maybe try to show how the deep connection he has with his brother in the first two chapters.. But... from ch 3, then that's when it gets interesting. To me the story fly after this chapter. So if you plan on reading, don't give up on the first two, cause you won't be disappointed, cause I didn't. Overall, this is a diamond in the rough. Yes it needs polishing, but if u ask me is it worth reading? My answer: Yes.