msLibrarianne

Ma'am that is a low blow

lmao even in emergencies, siblings will be little pieces of shit to each other

Yup, she seduces Wyatt so William Hale kills her, his brother, his whole family, and then turns into a supervillain and destroys the world, the end.

W I L L I A M

bro at least give a flashback or something, or else my mental image is just him shoving people in lockers like a bully from an 80s film

changing himself from what exactly, being vaguely annoying about how oh-so-scary he apparently is supposed to be?

author, i have advice, but instead of just saying "ooooo he's so bad, such a villain" and showing people being scared, please show WHY they are scared. Otherwise this just feels very flat and fake to be constantly insisting how everyone is trembling and scared or whatever, but we've seen him do.....literally nothing wrong. Just the scene from before his rebirth, and even then it appeared to not really be him in control. So like, right now this feels like some chuunibyou edgelord nonsense. Show us that he deserves his reputation if you want it to not seem silly.

I'm getting an ominous feeling, this is too wholesome and feels like major red plot flags, please don't hurt the dad