Zero_CC

WTF!? The FGO story is all messed up—Roman and Olga show up right at the start, what the hell!? Holy shit, I don’t want to be a xenophobe, but don’t these Chinese people know how to write a story!? It’s always the same old stuff—just by looking at the first two chapters, I already know everything that’s going to happen, how the characters are going to act, and how the story is going to unfold! And another thing I’ve always hated about these stories is how the protagonist just accepts his reincarnation and the system without question—like, they don’t suspect a thing! You just went to another world, gained powers, and your reaction is, “hel yeah”!?

It's kind of lame of the author to say that Kana is weaker than the Black Clover universe. I haven't even read past chapter 2, but just that alone has completely killed my motivation to read the story. I'm done here.

The Greater Order is better, after all; it will give you more battles and more interactions with various servants. Furthermore, Goetia could be considered a form of despair even more extreme than Izuru.

What the hell does “hundred-ton king” mean?.....................................................................................................................................................................................

1, both of them think that way, Reika, using weapons, would be a long-range fighter, Shizuku would be a healer, and Saeko would be a short-range fighter.

There is another story just like this one, but there are no adult scenes. I'll follow this one and see if there are any adult scenes or not. I'll keep an eye on it...

There's something about Chinese reincarnation stories that I've never understood: why do the protagonists never suspect their “golden fingers”? Or their reincarnation? Like, they go to another world, gain powers, and their maximum reaction to the situation is like, “Yay! Now what do I do?” It's as if they... weren't even human. What if everything that's happening is the manipulation of a god making this “golden finger” a “leash” in order to control the protagonist? Why don't they ever doubt it?

The bad thing about Chinese stories that have this theme of incubi or succubi, or with some kind of sexual system, is that they don't have adult scenes. It should be mandatory to have this kind of scene, after all, it's narratively necessary. Hopefully this story will have at least some adult scenes, whether it's the translator's idea or not.

This story is very strange to read, all the Japanese names have been changed to foreign names, Ethan, Maxwell, Leon, etc. Bro, the story takes place in Japan, not the United States.